I saw this girl in a farm
I was the only one she did harm
Oh farmer's daughter will you let me sow love in your heart?
Oh farmer's daughter will you hide my heart in a pomegranate?
Her muddy pants and messy hair seemed like heaven in disguise
I thought that until she showed me those sparkling eyes
Oh farmer's daughter will you let me sow love in your heart?
Oh farmer's daughter will you hide my heart in a pomegranate?
I wanted to drive the tractor
That just an excuse be to beside her
Oh farmer's daughter will you let me sow love in your heart?
Oh farmer's daughter will you hide my heart in a pomegranate?
Can we share an apple farmer's daughter?
Can I count the stars until sun raised above your hair?
Oh farmer's daughter will you let me sow love in your heart?
Oh farmer's daughter will you hide my heart in a pomegranate?
Farmer's daughter lets have cookies and milk
I will sit on the porch you deserve pillow made of silk
Oh farmer's daughter will you let me sow love in your heart?
Oh farmer's daughter will you hide my heart in a pomegranate?
Farmer's daughter please give me one seasonal kiss
I pray everynight for you to be the destionation of my bliss
Author notes
Please do watch the video. I decided to treat my readers and add the song that inspired and helped me to write this poem. Let the music and video take you away along with the poem lets see where you'll get. I need feedback on this. If you guys like this concept I can add my other poems like this as well so that every experience is mind blowing and unique. I want to leave an aftertaste in your hearts.
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Omg..your amazing dear friend !
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I loved her - she was me!
And my pants were always soiled too, but 'soiled' from playing rugby with the boys and climbing fences, catching eels and sitting in chicken-coups - not from pooing them - RFLMAO!
It must be the city-slickers that thought you meant soiled as in 'soiled' - or did you?
Anyway, I loved the poem throughout - the form lured me in initially (aside from the magnificent video!).
Yes please, more like this. Poetry and Music, Andy Warhol pop art!
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well i did mean soiled as soil i didnt mean ohh farmers daugther i love it when you shit yourself lol
as far as more poems like this: check out my homepage and read other poems starting backwards from this one which you have already have read 
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Oh wow. This was incredible. Great job with the rhymes on this. The juxtaposition of "heart" in the repeating lines added to the romantic quality. Stunning job, as always.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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This is cute as all hell except perhaps her pants being all messed up and stuff but yes there is much hidden beauty now isn't there. It is a fun series of repeating lines indeed AJ, it sounds like fun when you say them out loud.
Well the eternal bliss and kiss of a farmers daughter must be tempered for love might be blind but the old farmer he has a big old shotgun.
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Once chick shits her pants I'm usually looking on to something more special. Not to say this isn't a special experience...and yet.
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witty and fun. thanks for providing some smiles.
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I love the way you repeat some phrases..it was awesome.. keep it up...=p -
This is lovely...
I wanted to drive the tractor
That just an excuse be to beside her
And I've used this excuse before.
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I like this. Unique and enjoyable to read. Keep it up
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ah....AJ Ocean is an irish (troll) fairy in disguise!
he is using "charms" wickedly! Naughy Naughty poet!
Alright ...WOMEN...we need to spank this one..
this one sly dawg!
but then again...he'd probably...love it!
This poem and song put a huge smile upon my bonnie l(assies)
way to write!
and make us laugh, dance and sing a homeland song!
Guinness Ale for all!
ears/Seattle sis
and you can't wipe that smirk of your face now too!
wink-wink!
way to WRITE
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Now that I saw the video, the song is great, happy and fun. I can see how it was an inspiration. Excellent job, Aram
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Great Job
"Farmer's daughter please give me one seasonal kiss
I pray everynight for you to be the destionation of my bliss."
I loved this part. Well done.
Btw, Is there a video or not?
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