Suddenly we were torn apart,
It was not of our own doing.
I am on one shore, you on the other.
No communication is allowed to each other.
I have cried constantly night and day.
You are always on my mind, I miss you.
Though my tears no longer flow.
My heart is full of pain.
I need you, I want you, most of all I love you.
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A contest entry
- PIF Semi Quickie!! by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended September 12, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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one that I can understand and relate to in many ways and on different levels. intense and full of emotional pain. the images that you bring forth through this poem are ones that many can relate to as I could at one point.
good luck
kat
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This is much better
take care,
Your brother
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