The nightmares come again; you’re tortured still,
an aching void inside you, a bottomless well.
Tarnished iron clouds gather above a sea of chill.
I’m here to serve you now, no more cries, no fears.
A pale knight, a light in the abyss I’ll be for you.
A shield to protect, a shoulder for all of your tears.
Deep within your breast, the fire still flickers.
It drives you on to survive, stronger each day,
intense heat and passion, your heart beats quicker.
A blade that guards you, a strong voice in the dark.
Believe in me, have faith as you always do,
I’ll touch your senses once again, igniting the spark.
You will arise my phoenix goddess when you’re ready.
Lay your head on my chest, feel my breath on your skin.
It’s a promise, and you know what that means from me.
Author notes
I'm sorry. I really wanted to do something amazing for you again, but my muse is so dead lately. I've been trying write something for you since i got home and this was the fourth attempt.
I'll do a better one soon, i promise.
Comments
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I’ll touch your senses once again, igniting the spark.
wow your style is so unpredictable
the first stanzas I thought was
going to make this seems so dramatic
and strong but the ending so tender
the strong balance the tender at the end
still a classic and your style is unique
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I guess I just popped the comments cherry, well anyway let’s get to the verdict, I don’t know how you do it but you always seem to come out with a beautiful and inspiring piece even if you’re out of inspiration yourself.
Whoever this is dedicated should feel truly flattered, it’s not everyday someone writes a poem dedicated to someone and fully means every word said. Well done on every line.
~The not so little Seraphim~
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