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Next stop, your final destination

Past the railroad signs, across the tracks
Beyond the flashing lights

Deeper in the rose frosted haze

Faster than I did before
I know now the traps to avoid
not as much time
this time around
can't afford to waste a single day

my shadows on the ground before me
lead the way into unknown lands
my shadows are much braver then I am
striding forward without a fearfull backward glance

A lone dark train
Follows near behind me
waiting.
it alone knows my fate...


...and icy wind pierces my fragile skin
reminding me
of transparent dangers lying close within

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I'm on staff duty right now....like.....11.38 at night.....just.....writing....and thinking....trying to stay awake

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