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With me

Come,
Come with me into the light
let the darkness fade away,
let the light dance upon your skin,
feel the emptiness drift away.

Take,
Take my hand
hold on tight
let our fingers combine,
I'll lead you across the deep waters,
I’ll take you to a safe haven.

Stay,
Stay with me,
Lay awake, don’t fall asleep.
Don’t go too soon
Don’t walk away
Just stay with me,
Stay with me
One more day.

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