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One To Another

I was looking for a poem that had a long phone.
So my brother came and found a tone that sounds like book with a hook.
That took the hook to a boat that smelled like soap.
But the soap smelled like a floating leaf with some beef.



And that leaf with some beef went to to land to make a fan.
But that fan did not work so a dork is testing it so he can work like a dork with a fork.
And that fork was made by a snorkel  who is a snorer.
That snorer is a moaner with a quoter who loves this corner.



                              A corner with a sower that sews the foes of Moze.
                              Moze had a nose that small like a mall and fat like a mat!

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  • justbeth
    September 17
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    wOw

    You can really come up with rhymes! It's cute and funny.~


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    September 15

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    This is very cute, and well-written, for a 9-year-old. With you being so young, you probably remember better than we do how it feels to be spoiled-rotten and have those sweet-but-silly rhymes sung to you by well-meaning relatives.

    Thank you for your entry.


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    September 8
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    sorry but I have to DQ this entry due to the contest being for a background graphic, not for poems. Thanks anyways.