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Love doesn't have to make sense

How do I always find a way of feeling like a splintered arrow?
can we ever be happy when your finally free from your eternal promises?
I can forget all of life's prejudice in your company because I love you.

Love in it's simplist is never pure enough for them to understand.
Someone like me, a young blossom about to flower, feeling....
like a thorny weed in my own garden... because noone believes that
you and I are strong enough to face an army of sceptic hearts or a school of ignorant minds.

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  • Keith M Drew gold member
    October 23, 2009

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    For a start you are no weed within the garden of life.
    You are but the rose with thorns of pain in your heart.
    Love can never be pure, as a prescious stone that glitters to the promise of love upon your finger. It is the imperfections within it, that make it perfect.
    People cling to love and each other, because they are afraid to lose it.
    Afraid to be alone again.
    The secret as they try to be as one in mind, heart, body, and soul.
    Is even if or when you do lose love. It never dies, it will be a part of you for the rest of your life.
    Love is a moment, just as life is also.


  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    September 14, 2009

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    Word acrostics!

    It's a wonderful title to go with your double edged sword of a poem...

    Off topic- I love the interactive background you have going on... Adds to the ambiance of the poem, the whole idea of eternity...eternal promises.

    Yes, you place well the idea of being broken, and yet continuing to love them anyway. And then with the title, tying everything together. Making people question themselves and answering their own issues.

    Good job, a solid piece of work here.


  • Angelflower
    September 7, 2009

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    Bravo hun! a really wonderful write. I love the 'two' poems in one. you really did a lovely job expressing yourself. I loved it!

    Angel