A lot of people just piss me off
Cause all they do is bitch
Its like grow the fuck up
We really don't need this shit
Ruin it for everyone why don't you
You're acting like total dicks
Just grow the fuck up will you?
You're no longer five or six
Don't like someone, then ignore them
So we don't all have to hear you bitch
Cause seriously no-one really fucking cares
About whats going on in your head
Don't ruin it for everyone else
Cause really that's not cool
We have better things to discuss
Then watching you act like fools
So its about time you grew up
Or left the Fucking CB
Cause seriously we have had enough
Call somebody who Fucking cares!
Author notes
Like seriously no-one cares. All the cb is about is bitching and its getting really old.
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Hey this is really good mate
youre funny going off, of course that's when im not in trouble! heh. Really well writtien, nice flow for sure.
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haha... this should go on the front page
I agree though nytelyte... I think this is why a lot of our old reg's don't go in the cb anymore...
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wouldn't blame them either. And i thought this was supposed to be the best supportive poetry site
oh wait, thats just for the poetry lol.
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epic! I love you belly!
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Wow!! I think that this poem serves as proof positive that anger is a great motivator for a writer! I'm a little curious as to the situation that generated this poem but I imagine that it's personal and I won't pry. Instead, I'll just focus on the poem itself. Structure-wise, your meter is very solid here and the message abundantly clear. I especially like the line "if you don't like someone, then ignore them." This is something we should all practice a little more and to me, this is the main lesson of your poem. The only things I would change is the rhyme scheme in the third and fifth stanzas. You are pretty solid everywhere else but the rhyme breaks down in these stanzas because the words at the end of the second and fourth lines don't rhyme. Otherwise, I found your poem extremely enjoyable and I can think of a couple of people right off the top of my head that I'd like to send it to. Thanks for the honest use of language here.
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Just the usual CB whining, got sick and annoyed that i just had to write my anger out. Well i wasn't really trying to ryhme when i wrote this, i just wrote whatever came out lol. But yeah think I'll have another look and see what i can come up with. Thanks for reading.
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Great mommy I totally agree but this is where our materity level is below us
s great job and 
on 
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I think maturity flies straight out the window when it comes to the CB Thanks for commenting hun
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