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Fly Away

Far away is where I want to be.
Far away where I can be free.
Living as one, my true, pure soul.
Living my dreams of being completely whole.
So I pack my bag, my tatty old case,
Put it in my car with a smile on my face,
For I know I am doing what is best.
Putting my childhood and past to rest.
I am moving on, new future, new dreams.
I am going on a search for what my life means,
For it is now in my control, I have a say,
Of what I do from day to day.
So I start my car and fly away.
I pray to my angel that with me she will stay,
So that I am never alone in the new life that I find,
And I will be free to heal my body, soul and mind.

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  • spirit rising
    September 8
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    this has a nice soft flow to it and is quite visual too, shows emotion of sadness yet hope, i like it, thanks for sharing

  • wow!!! thats amazing!! i loved it!
    wonderful job!! keep up the good work hun and hope your doing okay x


  • Fallen-Thumper
    September 7
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    :)

    So I start my car and fly away. <--- i love that line.

    I love this piece, great imagery. Amazing!
    -Sennyo-