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Primal Scream

it tares with teeth
a primal scream
I need
I want
a beggars plea
for the everything
I give
It takes
a niche carved by destiny
and it goes deeper
blood for the reason
reason for the consequence
a beggar for every second
every second an eternity
louder and louder
until my dreams are infected
deeper
with every forgotten memory

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