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8th of April


Dawn of colors
Hands of compassion,

Dusk of waves
Lips of safety,

Light of stars
Bones of calmness,

Eve of earth
Heart of faith.

Birth of a Mother –
Womb of Love.


















Author notes

happy birthday to your mother!

Note: April 8 - My mom's bday!

A contest entry

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  • WordsAndWits
    September 13

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    Brilliant!

    Wonderful imagery buried in your words. Truth of vocabulary, touch of heart, splash of color. Thank you much for entering. I enjoyed reading this short but sweet piece. Best of luck,
    - Caroline