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Yesterday I felt a little
apprehensive.
A little self-defensive.
Wanna fix this mind-fuck with
Something too expensive.

Today I know a little more
than I know I knew before.
A smidgen more intelligent, though I am still
beside myself, inside the point
Not quite sick, but terribly ill.

Tonight I will feel a little
analytical.
A tad hypocritical. Definitely cynical.
Not on either edge, I am standing on the middle ground.
And yet I know there is no more middle ground
Left between us to be found.

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  • Melee Vau gold member
    October 8

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    introspective piece on feelings and the gulf that sometimes grows between what we want and what we know. the last lines:
    "Not on either edge, I am standing on the middle ground.
    And yet I know there is no more middle ground
    Left between us to be found"