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Changing attitudes

I always change for dinner, the werewolf said,
a custom copied by men, misunderstood.
For me it relieves the boredom of being undead,
It’s not a usance I’d ever change if I could.
Likewise, Olympian Jove when chasing tail
found it amusing to rearrange his looks
though he was numero uno alpha male
(read all about him in mythology books).
Humans prefer unnoticeable evolution,
by slow degrees.  It is frustrating ywis
for impatient progressives, when their revolution
spins 360 in vain.  But remember this:
something meant to change remaining the same
can be called remade if given a new name.

Author notes

Contest prompt quote: "The world hates change, yet it is the only thing that has brought progress." Charles Kettering

100 words. (The maximum allowed)

'ywis': a variant of 'iwis', an almost obsolete adverb meaning assuredly or certainly. Source: the SOED.

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  • DogFish silver member
    September 27
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    "the more things change the more the remain the same"

    ...but you said it leaving the cliché behind!


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    September 7
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    this is a smart write, i enjoyed it, best of luck in my contest


  • Keith
    September 7

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    Your first four lines make me smile:

    Werewolf in a suit,
    May look rather cute,
    But watch when he sits down to dine,
    He'll roll up his sleeve,
    Check his watch, and then leave,
    Saying: "Hon, is it your place, or mine?"

    The next four with the reference to Jove are similarly amusing:

    When Leda was fixing her face,
    She found a big swan in the place,
    "Hey you, mister Swan! You'd better be gone!"
    And this led, instead, to disgrace.

    And I love the way you finish off. I think as a definition of success, this gets top marks from me. Have some applause, for goodness' sake!

    • Seasinger gold member
      September 11
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      Thank you for your cheering comments. Much appreciated from someone as skillful and as astutely humour-aware as you.
      Also enjoyed your limerick contributions. Purely for the sake of aesthetics, in the first of them, you might edit your comment to correct the obvious typo in the word following Hon,
      - Ian