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Dear Poets:
I cannot help but fall in love with all of you.
You are both shameless and passionate torture experts!

(except for the five people
on my ignore list-screw you!)

Sometimes, I wonder if my life would be less or more
if~ I~ didn't have the torment of poets in my life.

I could skip through the wonders of day and night
and not even care about the fearless beauty of life.

I could be ignorant, blind, and deaf
to the sounds of humanity and nature that shout all about.

I could step on a leaf outstretched alone on the ground
and not wonder what poet left his heart weeping aloud.

I could look at a rusty key and -not- think damn...
this is a lucky charm for five -good-wicked writes!

I could bottle up my soul and sell it on e-bay
Bidding starts at $1.00 for the most bitter woman you ever met!

but oh no...you've got to fill your ink and pen
and un-ravel our souls without novacaine!

I've bawled several layers of flesh this year
and last year was absolutely no picnic either.

You've up-lifted me to heights of passion unknown
and depths of hell that you've cautioned I should never walk upon!

so....now you know why...I humbly confess
I cannot help but fall in love with all of you.

You are both shameless and passionate torture experts!
and I truly do know I would be a lesser soul without you.

Much Love,
(you blessed bastards)
Ears2hearyou

Author notes

Contest prompt: Write a letter to a poet...

I owe so many of you a piece of my soul
I couldn't choose just..one!
much love,
ears
p.s. oh crap I forgot I was going to cuss less this year! (shit)
sorry. i'm stil...evolving...amen.

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  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13
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    A worthy homage, Poet.


  • Perfect Asymmetry
    September 12
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    It's a beautiful dedication and a pleasure to read. Thank you for these lovely words.
    Nela


  • JadedSparrow
    September 12

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    A truly wonderfully written piece. I was going to copy and paste my favorite lines, but Id have to past the whole poem. It was a pleasure to read, from start to finish.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 11
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    I apologize, sis. I am removing this from contest...it did not fit the criteria. But you have penned an amazing poem here. I hope to see you in my future contests.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 11

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    now this is worth a place in my list,
    such beautiful depths, and i just
    love your thoughts penned

    with love and blessings

    Rend


  • mgmc gold member
    September 10

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    Very well written. Funny and touching and feels very sincere. Excellent take on the prompt, IMHO. I loved the phrase, "I could bottle up my soul and sell it on e-bay......".
    Very good writing!


  • sgking123
    September 9

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    wow

    dear sis,

    this was astounding stufff.....the kind which makes reading only once in a while....you stole my heart away by the cloice of words,,,and what a chiding start you gave this helluva of a poem.Here it is what I loved most:

    cannot help but fall in love with all of you.
    You are both shameless and passionate torture experts!

    (except for the five people
    on my ignore list-screw you!)

    my portfolio begs your benign presence...my dear


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 9

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    Oh, dear beautiful sister. This was a stunning poem. You never fail to do one of two things, either put a smile on my face or draw a tear from my eye. You have done both here because while this was a great humorous poem, it did not follow the criteria of being in prose form. If you wish to revise to meet the qualifications, please do so. I would love for you to still be in the contest, so if you would like to add another, instead, let me know and I will reopen.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • ajocean silver member
    September 7

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    go ahead hate me


  • John BoSox
    September 7

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    Back at ya, kiddo..You are loved here.Trust me..I feel the same..You can talk to me, anytime..for any reason..I mean this..We all need a friend, from time to time..we need to be able to vent...Do it...I am here..Great poem..I appreciate it..from my heart

    John,

    your friend..Thank you for so much..you know what I mean........


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    September 7

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    shit!

    LOL sorry laughing at your ANs too funny,
    this was great hun, loved it!
    and loved your signing off too. hehe.
    you don't change [not in the good things anyhow ] i like that!
    keep up the great motivating, poet loving, life sharing writes!



    Tasha


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 7

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    HEARTFELT!!!

    You are so right, we as a whole make such a huge impact on others lives with our poems, our comments on others poems, and just reaching out to those in need. I know I am deeply blessed to have found this site and all of the wonderful people who I am proud to call friend. 's


  • Diablosanjil gold member
    September 7

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    I loved this write and well we can overlook the cussing hehe. Keep onpenning Dear Friend.. Best of luck in the contest!!!!

  • Macsword
    September 7

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    Lovely and Terse....

    Not the typical letter. I feel loved though

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