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i gets better

i softly kiss his perfect lips, my longue sliding across the bottom one
wrapping my arms around his waist i hug him tightly

"stop" he whispers "I'm not in the mood"

i look up at him and see hard eyes looking at me
only 6 words, but they are enough to hurt my heart

i let him go and move to sit on the bed and curl up
tracing the scars on my thighs i look at him sadly

does he not want anything to do with me?
is it because I'm a girl and he doesn't want that?
did i do something to piss him off?
or is this something else all together?

i watch him as he lays down silently and close his eyes
crawling beside him i wrap one arm around his belly
cuddling close i feel his warm body heat and smile

tomorrow will be better
even when the night is a train wreck

Author notes

just something i wrote a few days ago and then lost and i just found it... yay lol

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  • Broken Thoughts
    October 23, 2009
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    I have days like these, I like your way of just knowing it will get better, good write


  • Galaxy2
    September 26, 2009
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    Wow...
    how optimistic!
    Your feelings are so genuine, sweet girl!

    Kisses all over!
    Gal2


  • PinkeyPromise
    September 7, 2009
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    this is a good poem. i like it