You are the bowl of icecream,
I am the child who can't say no
Which means that one day
You will be my huge gut,
My low self-esteem,
And I will be the man
Who wont say yes
A contest entry
- My FIRST CONTEST!!!! Things You Should Have Said.... by refinnej.
550 points, ended September 19, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Love the metaphors.... "You will be my huge gut" that is kinda brutal and funny at the same time. Thanks for entering
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I'll take that as you liked it
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you should take it that way!
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nice...
al
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thank you
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Amusing sir Glenn, amusing...indeedly so.
kingfog
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thanks gary
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I loved the first 2 lines... lol.
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thaaaanks
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