sitting under the nights sky
watching the white dots blink
around the moon tonight
large and glowing in the dark
covering me in shine
I hope you see it from where you are
lifting your face to its beams
I am thinking about you
and the moon is smiling
A contest entry
- Prewrite Quickie by GuiltedShadow.
700 points, ended September 7, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Full Bandit Applause!
Thank you for supporting The Poetic Bandits reading list, by contributing this fine poem
~Lilac
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A lovely poem notwithstanding it's charming brevity, sad remeniscences and
celestial metaphor.Well Done
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Wonderful poem under the enchantment of the moon that draws hearts together in its' sweet beams. Loved this poem, well done dear poet, write on!
Brother Dennis
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Such nice romantic thoughts for someone too far away very touching
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Oh such a sweet write here, as lovely as love itself! It's clear you have such a strong feeling toward your beloved and that is a good inspiration.
I thank you kindly for sharing your poem with us and good luck in the contest
~Massy~
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