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I Don't Care

try and get me back
see how easily i blow you off

im no longer daddy's little girl
cuz 'daddy' doesnt know how to be a fukin father

all he knows is reefer and booze
you walk in the door and treat me like shit

'you're late, why weren't you in this class, why didnt you do this?!'
thats all i ever fukin heard from you

when where the hell were YOU last night
when i cried wonderin if you were dead?!

hey! every fukin thought of that?
until you straighten up and learn to be a father

dont say fuk all to me
dont try and suck up and get me back to you

dont try to be my father until you learn how to
cuz im done with your shit

i never want to see you again
i just dont care anymore

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i dont care

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  • redhanded
    September 7

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    awww :[ such a great write. full of emotion and very powerful. If you could please put the title and or the option number in your author notes I would greatly appreciate it as it helps me ti judge fairly. thanks for entering, and best of luck to you in this contest and in the future
    andi
    (redhanded)