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~Bound~

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I've been waiting….
wearing nothing
but a red silk Kimono, opened

all the way...

down.



Brushing myself up
against his back, I whisper
intimate longings in his ear.




A smile comes across his
beautiful face, his look gets me
every time --

a look of pure pleasure
brought on by his love for me.




I feel his need so strong,
dreamy eyes watch me as I come
and kneel between his legs.

Looking up, our eyes hold
desire between us
I slowly...

unbutton

his pants,


and all that he is, is finally

set free.

 

 


Touching the velvetiness

of his skin, he is defiantly at

my mercy.

Knowing this, I smile,
wrapping my arms around him.
straddling his thighs, I begin to

move and slowly grind.



Leaning in,
giving him a deep sensual sweep,
my tongue playfully teasing
as I begin to suck softly

on his lower lip.




Hungrily, our kiss deepens,
moans escape into sighs...
his hands, oh his hands have
the ability to make me feel many

things!




But his kiss...




Yes...

His kiss has touched every part
of my being, bringing me to heights
of such intense pleasure as I bare
my soul to no other.




I wonder how I could ever
grasp the measure of his love without
ever feeling any fear inside,

for he has bound himself
so tight, around my heart, saying,

"I will never let you go..."


He then whispers to me,
“Baby I want to kiss you

all over” --


and he does.

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: i want to kiss you all over

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  • Winwood
    4 hours ago
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    Such class and beauty!...So evocative and sensual...your words from the heart and from one that knows what love is! Exceptional write...from a true romantic and sensual lady...you touch so many feelings on all levels...thank you.


  • sgking123
    2 days ago
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    repeat visit

    and I confirm your slot in passion Caper I am gonna hold soon..oucchh...blisters on my finger tips as i touch this.......sizzlin


  • jackreed3 gold member
    November 18
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    That was fucking great.. I jus love it.. every part of it.
    Bond is a perdect title..


  • Peteskid gold member
    November 18
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    i think the thing that comes through most here is the sense of caring, two who care deeply, sensual and full of feelings...very well done...congrats...PK


  • Xianaria gold member
    November 6

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    Congrats on the Silver, Rend!
    I'll trade you my shiny for yours! You deserve it, this is a gorgeous write.

    Love & Blessings,
    ~ Tim

  • sgking123
    November 6
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    sizzling

    graphic,amazing and actual,factual,inviting and disarming....its hard to give up after reading it...the most basic and core of man-woman scenario so passionately done....guess red kimon was the veil that stands rended..just kidding..loved it......I am going to have a collection on this mush sought after topic soon...and you would be start author poetess invitee in that.


  • Nom de Plume
    November 5

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    reading this again Rend I actually think it deserved a platinum trophy... some very seductive images and always with your touch of sensuality, a potent mix...


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    October 28
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    This is very hot, every word had heat. I enjoyed the ending to this Good luck in the contest SH


  • Sweet-Sins
    October 28
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    wow this is really good
    x


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    October 28

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    Damn but this is hot!
    Geez, talk about shivering in delight!!!
    and my honey is at work .....
    Thank you for sharing!
    Bravo and kudos to you!
    This is HOT!


  • crivanea silver member
    October 26
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    wow..now that's sensual at its best!!!! love it an excellent take on the prompt and congrats on the silver...

  • Pogo7747
    October 22
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    Wow, pretty descriptive. very well done.


  • Hikari Lady
    October 17

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    Wow!!! This does deserve a wow you know. I suck at sensual and though I've read for it I have never came across such a write. It made me dazed, longing and in complete awe. Well worthy of silver.

    Love
    ~Noor


  • toomysterious
    October 16
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    Hot indeed and a Silver trophy as well. Sensual done to perfection.


  • JinSays gold member
    September 21

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    ohmy, have I read this yet? If I havent well damn, and if I have then damn again....whooo, girlie this was smoking hot. I am impressed.
    think I want to read it one more time...

    love to you darling,
    jin


  • Vernal Bloom
    September 12

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    Now that I have found your poetry, I wanna read more, you have just excited me with your words! Wow wow, this covered my face with naughty grins and sparkle in eyes! A good poem for the propmt.
    Thank you for the share of feeling and good luck

    ~Massy~
    PS. your AP mama, Rose Angel, is my AP mum, too


  • sheltered
    September 12

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    "as I begin to suck softly

    on his lower lip. "

    ha ha you got me there
    i'm pretty sure that was intended

    you seem to have a greater knowledge of what love truly can be
    than I have ever come close to
    and make is seem so natural
    as it should be
    not dirty or shameful as some would have it

    again... very nice


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 11

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    Your gifting at drawing the readers in to your writes is nothing short of spell binding! Another masterpiece...I think it is your best in the sensual! I wish you well in the contest as always, dear...Mom


  • Dalaney gold member
    September 10

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    what a prompt! and what a poem! It's been a long while since I've read a good sensual piece of poetry, and I am so glad you have written one that is not only classy but hot as the devil!


  • Garmond gold member
    September 9

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    Ummm.... Classy, evocative, dazzling, affecting, sensual, romantic, moving, intense, seductive and........ a cleverly crafted write. I like how you intentionally mislead the reader with your description of.... the kiss
    Soaked in a sense of the most pure inspiration Rend.


  • Captain Jenny
    September 8
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    Oh wow... Amazing write. Descriptive, yet still so tasteful...


  • Bluebird
    September 8
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    `

    Well done. Good luck in the contest.


  • Away From the Sun
    September 8

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    P.S.

    Do you have the phone number of that hot guy in the picture??? I think he'd make me feel a bit less lonely. hehehe

  • Away From the Sun
    September 8
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    Hmmm...

    I should write like this, maybe I would not be so LONELY!

    An extraordinary write, as are most of yours. But the sensuals do illuminate what is lacking in my life.



    Love you, sweet pea!

    Debbie


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    September 8

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    Superb Plus

    'tis a very fine write, with just the right note of sensuality. You have expressed your thoughts quite well, with excellent imagery. Thanks for sharing.


  • awannabepoet
    September 8

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    And the imagery does live does it not?

    What a great little piece of poetry to read, Rend you always find a way to make the eyes dance along those unseen dotted lines.

    awannabepoet


  • Eric Marsh
    September 8

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    oh...where are my tranquillizers.........a tranquillizer, a tranquillizer ,my kingdom for a tranquillizer......nice one babe...hhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmm


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 7

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    This is awesome! You really have a way with words and capturing the minds of your readers. It's poetry like this that I love to sit and read. I love how you blend passion and intimacy as well as sensuality in this. Wonderful imagery throughout! I wish you all the best in this contest dear and thanks so much for featuring it here! Keep it up!




    Jeremy0826


  • sinfull
    September 7
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    ssszzzzzzzzzz

    sizzle...tastfully delish.. tha visual /omagry is fantastic! An awesome pen...hot, hot, hot!


  • Pure Thought silver member
    September 7

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    Let me tell you what I don't like first...


    ok then, nothing in the negative column.

    I like the form and dramatic spacing, it adds to the heat. This is excellent heat from the red kimono...
    all the way...
    down.

    Buddy


  • Melba Solis-Z
    September 7
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    Wow!! loved it! I've missed reading your poetry.

  • refinnej
    September 7
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    Wow...so steamy but "tastefully" done. wonderful!!!
    so much love in your words.
    you are amazing!!!
    *hugs*


  • Mango Memories gold member
    September 7
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    Bravo!!!


  • Deceits Tears silver member
    September 7
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    This Is awesome ...my you sure know how to grab the reader with your words
    Beautiful and sensual, Well done !!!


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    September 7

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    Dear heart this sensuous compelling wriet
    touched the deepest parts of mind with
    delicious love .. beautiful as always Hugs Sis♥


  • John Faulkner gold member
    September 7

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    Such imagery.You capture my attention with your word expression.This is sensuous, in its rare form, to be sure..Inviting..erotic.. I can feel your desire, from start to finish..You capture my attention..great flow to this...John

    I loved it


  • trekkergirl
    September 7

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    Oh WOW

    Very intense... very hot... very sensual... Great imagery. I really want to be this lady... shhhh... think i'll just get off of here and jump into that shower now.

    Wow I take more showers when I read your work than I do whenever I read anyone elses...

    Thanks for sharing this with us.


  • Rick Weston silver member
    September 7

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    too funny, as i got to your final lines my mind immediately jumped to that song - and i had not yet looked at the contest prompt.

    you do a wonderful job capturing your readers attention, pulling them into this loving tender scene. i love the connection you draw in the closing stanza between the physical experiences and having bared your soul.

    beautifully done.


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    September 7

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    Whoa baby now this is what captivates me in a person too, it's all in the eyes and the kiss. This is just stunning hun. Best to you in the contest


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      September 8
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      Thank you Sweeties,
      your comments and clappies,
      are so precious to me

      with love and blessings
      Rend


  • Cup-a-Joe
    September 7

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    It's all in the kiss. You are talking my language here. I would kiss than mow the yard, and i love to mow.

    You sure know how to make a man want to knock on your door witha few dozen roses.
    ~~His kiss has touched every part
    of my being, bringing me to heights
    of such intense pleasure as I bare
    my soul to no other.~~

    oh yes.!

    Joe


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 6
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    Sounds like some amazing kiss right there hun! Love what you did with this prompt

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      September 6
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      thank you Angel,
      always nice to see you
      pay a visit, thank you so
      much for your comment and
      clappies s
      with love and blessings always

      Rend


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 6
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    jesus..

    another very sensually hot and pleasing write.. wow.. what can i say?? it's blazing..

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      September 6
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      thank you, i ran with the prompt!! i am glad you like
      your support and encouragment are always
      a blessings

      Rend

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