I know it's very frustrating
But that is what they are awaiting
Just go faster when your feet are sore
We've made it so far; can't turn back anymore
CHORUS
Would you die with guilt or die with pride?
Would you die alone or with us by your side?
If you want to go you better pack
Once you set foot out there, there's no turning back
-chorus ends-
With you we can be a little more stronger
Please say that you'll stay a little bit longer
It will feel better if you make a move
So let's do it now- win or lose
Chorus
One day we will stand up and fight
Could be tomorrow, let's plan tonight
Some of us will die for the rest to be free
One of them could be you, one of them could be me
Chorus x2
Can't turn back,
You can't turn back,
No you can't turn back now.
Author notes
Prompt
Title: Change
Artist: Taylor Swift
Line: Fight the one we've worked for all these years
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Comments
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oh wonderful.
I love taylor swift, and you deffinitly done that song justice.
thanks for entering, best of luck -
Write Tight from tonight
With you we can be a little more stronger
Please say that you'll stay a little bit longer
It will feel better if you make a move
So let's do it now- win or lose
Perhaps tighter diction would help "get the message across"
United we would be far stronger,
stay with us for a moment longer,
lets move together, not look back,
win, lose, we'll see, don't wait, attack !
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