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The Horns Beneath His Halo

I saw his halo
Floating above, soft and blue,
But it was the horns
Underneath his shining crown
That ripped my poor heart in two.

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The Horns Beneath Her Halo
my first attempt at tanka style...hope i didn't ruin it

A contest entry

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  • redhanded
    September 6

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    awww NO! you did not ruin this at all I actually quite love this. thank you so much for entering! and best of luck to you in this contest and in the future
    andi
    (redhanded)