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I saw you through.




I gaze in your eyes
I see deception
I look in your mind
I see corruption

do you have a heart?
cause I did not pay attention
do you only know how to hurt?
cause you have no emotion

I envy your confidence
cause you fear not rejection
but me ever loving you,
that is out of question.

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  • dearlindsayxx
    September 21

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    love the last stanza
    this poem seems like it's about a guy who tries to play a lot of girls or something.
    i like it, because i can relate to that very much.


  • Britty-16
    September 20

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    ...awesome

    I really like this.
    excellent wording.
    keep up the good work.
    xx