vibrant colors are
fluttering freely away
leaving me in awe
Author notes
I hope this is considered nature. What inspired me was I love butterflies, and I didn't want to let you down by not entering. 
Written April 3rd, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Contestku by Cemetery Rose.
300 points, ended April 5, 2004, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is so beautiful and yes butterflies, they are so pure of heart and colorful, they do make me in awe, very great description, a short poem, but a pretty one indeed! Thanks for sharing, read ya laters!
-Little Tim
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Butterflies are my favorite, there is nothing more beautiful. Thank you so much for the lovely comment
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Gorgeous. I have always wanted to be a butterfly, and live freely of the world's thoughts and impurities...just to exist, if even for a short time, in harmony with myself and the world around me. The imagery here is astounding--it makes me want to go outside and sit in a field for hours, waiting for a butterfly to pass by.
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Good and very emotionally moving
Beautifully written! I really enjoyed the ending that gave your poem life! Keep up the good writting.
Thank you for comments on my Great Grandbaby Jesus. We love him so much. Keep him in your prayers. He was in the hospital lately and not sure what he has wrong. Prayerfully all bad news has passed.
God is blessing you!
With Christian love,
Dwan
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Thank you Susan
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flutterful
beautiful haiku! love the imagery...butterflies are awesome! You really got this 'ku thing down!
Peace and love
Susan
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i'll kick you in the ku....don't mess with me
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yeah, biotch, write me a ku
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hint hint?
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Yes I do i do i do i do.... hint hint
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butterflies...very beautiful, you know every time i see a butterfly thing i think of you...haha
good job with this one too...i actually was going to write you a haiku about butterflies but you don't need one from me...
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Awww this is beautiful - I have a tattoo of a monarch atop a sunflower on my shoulder (the sunflower is all done in monochrome with a little white to highlight the center)...just reminded me of that good luck hon
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