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natural therapist

Therapist office:

A couch for you to relax on.
and a chair they sit on,
while they listen.

Nature:

A rock to sit on.
And nature to listen
to your every dream and sorrow.



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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 18
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    an interesting take on the prompt, thanks for entering


  • FaeryMouse
    September 9

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    This is a very excellent poem you penned here....And nature is always the best theraptist...Listen to voices in the wind to find your hearts desire..


  • Edie gold member
    September 9
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    I like your refreshing and unexpected approach. Well done.

  • Excellent job. I have communed with nature many a time. I have also done the therapy thing. Sometimes one is perfect, sometimes it is the other. Great job.

    Mike


  • Amera gold member
    September 6

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    This is not only beautiful, it's profound. I think nature is most likely the best therapist.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • individuality gold member
    September 6

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    a good piece of poetry penned, ah yeah and they do not lsiten for free, they charge you a fortune which just makes you worry more because it is money you can't afford and then your hair goes grey lol - now nature, that is much more soothing, an ear for free with every leaf.

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