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Response To Your Deceit

‘Sometimes to love one person
Isn’t enough to live on’
‘Sometimes a heart is stolen
Knowing that it’s wrong’

Your reasons are flimsy
Your excuses don’t wash with me

Sometimes love is forsaken
Betrayed and left alone
Sometimes a heart is broken
Burned like you have this one

You left me deserted
Your presence is unwanted

Sometimes life is so fickle
Just like your sullied love
Sometimes it won’t go your way
So gather up your stuff

You told her you were single
You blinded her with your lies
You thought we’d never meet, boy!
You are gonna get a surprise--

You told her you’re divorced?

You’ve got it, pal.

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Written for a contest. This isn't a subject I usually write on but I thought it was both interesting and challenging.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    September 10

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    this is well written and so very how i feel at the moment. thank you for entering this into my contest and i wish you well in the judging process. viyanna rosemarie


  • VelvetWings
    September 10

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    This is so bitter but I really laughed out loud at the ending. XD