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Hero

Do I always have to be the Hero?
Always catching those who fall?
Yet when I fall, no one catches me.
I save people,
But who saves me?
They raise me higher and higher,
And the higher you are,
The longer the fall.
We keep on going,
Helping others,
Saving as many as we can,
Even with that knowledge...
Everyone says we're so strong,
But we're so much weaker then you'll ever know,
Because of all of you we don't let it show,
We will continue to fight for you,
Until the day that we fall,
Can not get back up,
Finally cremated,
Spread,
Sword as tombstone,
Honour remaining,
I will not fear it,
Once it comes I will be ready,
Fight it as I can,
So that those I care for won't have a loss,
Just another piece on the board acting my part,
Will I be sacrificed for another?
Or make it to the end of the board?

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  • Phantom-Phanatic
    September 16
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    wow. your poetry is so deep. this is an incredible piece and its very true in my life.

  • nudy-pants
    September 9
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    it is quite good but the rythme isn't that great :/