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I'd rather be in memphis. (acrostic)

I'd rather be in Memphis.
Don't know why exactly

Ranting on about music
After a long day and a bottle of whiskey
Thinking about dreams, dreaming about thoughts
Hell is only a mile away I suppose...
Ever been to Hell?
Reverend Clark says that i'm on my way.

"Break those nasty habits!
Eventually you will die!"

I probably hate him, but how can you hate a "spiritual leader"?
Nasty perverted old bastard....

Memphis, maybe someday I'll go there.
Eventually i'm sure I will for some reason or another
Mom thinks i'm crazy for wanting anything more than I got
Pops thinks i'm a worthless shit bag
Hell, I'd probably think so too if I could look through his eyes.
I don't even know why I want to go there honestly.
Something to do with a Dylan song i'm sure...

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  • tidoubleguher
    October 30

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    Sometimes, your passion doesn't need a rhyme or reason to it. Close your eyes and cannonball in to it. Well, in this case. keep your eyes OPEN (necessary for driving), cannonball in to your..car? and drive. Music doesn't need a reason. It's just music.


  • DonSulliven
    September 8
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    Sometimes you don't need a reason to want something. Motive is corrupting, just go for it, you know?


  • wbiro gold member
    September 7

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    I went to Nashville (what a commercial town, they call New York when they think they have something 'big'...! ) never made it to Memphis... did a cover of 'Memphis' by someone... no... it was 'Jackson'... lol it's on cassette tape, I'll have to mp3 it someday... I think this piece is ready for the real title... maybe transfer this title to the author's notes...


    • Gibson0918
      September 8
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      Yeah i'd like to hear that, if you get it on an MP3 let me know.


      Thanks for reading it though I really do appreciate it.
      I'll give it a title while i'm thinking on it.


      • wbiro gold member
        September 8
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        it's kind of like I'm following your musical endeavors... you'll have to keep a 'musical efforts' journal now... (and if it's efforts to get paid, then 'career'...! )

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