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Mountains whisper

As the mountains dip to the morning sun
Worries disappear with the winds
As the winding path on which all are led
Slowly becomes uncoverd
For those whose hearts are ready
To see the coming day and the coming joy

Sitting in wait the lotus flower blooms
For each person has their own sprit
Their own symbol
What is seen while you look into its petals?
What is your journey



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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 7
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    Wonderful sense of hope in this! Just lovely hun


  • Stickboy
    September 6

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    as always this is another great poem Emm
    As the mountains dip to the morning sun
    Worries disappear with the winds

    I want to move to the mountains now so all my worries can disappear


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 6

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    This was a brilliant, introspection-inducing write. I love the whisper of alliteration in the first stanza. Amazing job with the imagery, too.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~