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first day of college haiku





stuffed things in closet
grabbed phantom hair in panic
said goodbye to loverboy
lifted books up to their shelf
psyched up sophomores played games
project runway with gay theatre dude
no expressions anywhere
too tired
to try
very hard.













Author notes

not a haiku

AT ALL

ahhhh

oh, say what you mean

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  • unbroken record
    September 6

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    phantom hair in panic


    i read "phantom planet"

    which is so very wrong. please enjoy college.


  • sixtimesseven
    September 6
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    i was about to mention how this is not a haiku but then you said it.
    i love it.
    project runway=love.


  • Phoetiquette
    September 6
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    I mean are you at the u of m twin cities?