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Verse

Breathe for living

Red the blood

Feelings giving

Verses flood  

Words of silence

Speak from soul

Of heart’s reliance

Verses flow 

Sorrows bleeding

Thoughts reveal

Deepest feeling

Sometimes heal

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 6

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    Stunning. I adored this poem. You did a great job with the emotion as well as the imagery in this. I especially loved the second stanza. Stunning.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~