I step onto the ice
Take my position
The music starts
Suddenly, my feet move themselves
My arms and legs pump
I glide around the rink
My body performs the routine like a robot
The crowd cheers wildly
I skid to a halt
Bing! Bing! Bing!
The judges' scores light up the screen
Oh my Gosh!
I've done it!
Skated Myself To Success
A contest entry
- Prompt: Prewrites II. by Manda Kathryn.
400 points, ended September 22, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Cheer me up by SweetRoses.
650 points, ended November 13, 15 entries
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Comments
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This is very nicely written. Thank you for entering. Very cheery, and success is always a good thing. Always worth smiling about.
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Thank You for Your Entry ~
I've always admired ice skating and wished I could have the balance to do it; this write makes me long for that talent even more I can imagine the thrill of my feet skating across the rink in your words
Best of Luck
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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"Skated Myself To Success" A great ending to a great poem. I really liked this poem. The ending was my favorite. Skating yourself to success that was great. Keep on writing
-Steve-
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