I hate the way you laugh, it’s sickening.
I hate the glint in your eyes when you look at the sun.
you burn me.
I live in the dream of burning you.
I hate the way you talk, your words,
they scar.
you scar.
I hate the way you move
how I stare when you do.
it’s black, the sky
let it rain
drown you out of my head, maybe
[get out]
stop
talking
moving
breathing.
stop
pretending
that you love me.
heh.. wake up?
you hurt
miserably.
you kill.
you eyes stab
and your lips suck the blood out of my breath.
stop moaning.
it’s deafening..
[mute me]
disappear,
fade..
into the nothing that you were..
and tremble.. at the sight of me..
you owe me awe, my love.
you owe me you.
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Author notes
just a draft, will work on it furthur more sometime soon.
Comments
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i admire this power you have...the power to channel everything you feel no matter what it is...it's amazing how u can transform it all into beauty...i really really admire that...
"you owe me awe, my love.
you owe me you."
and this is breathtaking...
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"you owe me awe, my love.
you owe me you."
you're awe-some.. and lots more... there is a thin line between love and lust.. between love and hate.. between lust and lost... and you're all the inbetweens..
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its painful to read this but it is so amazing
everything about u is beautiful.. even ur pain.. cz u let it out in the most amazing way, the way u write.. its breathtaking
(ps: don't delete it when things get better)
~rana~
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