I know you felt my finger tips
brush your hair, cross your lips
Your body arches into mine
in your beauty my eyes dine
I drink of you your kisses sweet
place glass slippers on your feet
Dance with you in satin dress
in the arms of my Princess
Take you where no man has been
beads of sweat on naked skin
Beckons me a need to taste
a garden underneath your waist
You place your hands around my head
and lift your ass up off the bed
Grinding hard your lips in me
as my face glows in exstasy
A climax that came in showers
still I stay and smell the flowers
This hidden eden that gave birth
to my heaven here on earth
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This was just ...well It's hard to find the right word(s) for this!
Stanza 4 made me giggle when you said "beckons me a need to taste a garden underneath your waste"
Stanza 5 made me blush
And I have no idea why..
Yes, very stimulating.
Mandi
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wow...
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I like the sensual nature of this. Its sexual without too many details, if you know what I mean. I like the last two lines: 'This hidden eden that gave birth...to my heaven here on earth. It gives a good idea of how this situation makes you feel.
Great write.
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I thank you for reading.You seem like a very nice person.
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Hehe. Cool digs. I liked how you made it sound nature-ish.
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i like the sexuality yet lack of exoticness in this poem
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And I TY both
It was fun to write.Hmmm maybe too much fun.
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