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I'm Not Leavin' 'til What's Lost is Found

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Baby, Baby, Baby, please turn around,

I'm not leavin''til what's lost is found.

Watch your step, my heart's down on the ground.

A simple yes or no should be the next sound.

 

Baby, Baby, Baby, Hey! Why don't you stay?

There's so much lady that I have to say.

If I search forever, I'm bound to find a way.

Let me see that sweet smile and I'll fly away.

 

(Chorus)

 

I'm not asking for much, just don't pull that lever.

I'm no magician, no; I'm not that clever.

And there's only two things that I need from you...

 

Now and forever.



So Baby...

I'm not leavin''til what's lost is found.

 

 

Baby, Baby, Baby, Hey! Why don't you stay?

There's so much lady that I have to say.

If I search forever, I'm bound to find a way.

Let me see that sweet smile and I'll fly away.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Author notes

r e d b a r c h e t t a d r i v e

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Please visit: http://allpoetry.com/group/show/Classic+Rock+Poetry

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  • aboomer silver member
    November 17
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    I thought as I read this that it would make a good song - then I saw that it is a song for a contest - congrats on the Gold!
    nice job!


    • redbarchettadrive gold member
      November 17
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      Thanks so much aboomer! I am sorry for your loss too. Like I said, I'm in a nursing home 5 days a week myself. (CNA)

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    November 14
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    A fine song, that paints a beautiful picture, well written, thank you.


  • Dearly Beloved...
    November 1
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    A great song!
    Nice length, and i could here the lyrics in my head as I read.
    As always, Nice job


  • Still Standing gold member
    September 18

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    Great song!

    I can hear the rhythmn and feel the beat to this song...it makes sense it has a menaing and provides a vivid image to it. I love it all great job!

  • Pranab -1
    September 9
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    Hi
    Pranav

    I started reading your poems.. Its grea


  • darell
    September 9

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    Excellent!

    Congratulations on winning the gold.
    I could feel the heart and soul of the song
    in your words. you have a wonderful gift
    for expression. Nicely done. Bravo!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 6
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    Standing Ovation
    well done!!!


    Passions


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    September 6

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    Oh Wow. That was stunning. I loved it. The rhymes were amazing, and it was so beautifully emotional.
    Best of luck in the contest.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Minstrel-Morose
    September 6
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    HAH I sctually started singing it. I love yuh Mann. Your amazing


  • Antipodi
    September 5

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    Wow wow this really rocks I can hear the song its fabulous and the emotions pour out like screaming guitar ...excellent write dear poet


  • Mango Memories gold member
    September 5
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    Whoa. This would make a good song on its own!


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    September 5

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    this rocked baby baby I am not lost
    just open your eyes and I will fly away
    well said awesome Mark Hugs Angel♥

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