The love of a good friend
is as a sip of water
to a parched and dying soul.
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By: GuiltedShadow
aka
Janeece Jackson
A contest entry
- Happy Quickie by Lolitax3.
400 points, ended September 27, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Three Lines Of Wonder by poets whisper.
700 points, ended November 4, 104 entries
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ah the love of a good friend - it is like a dream on the tip of the tongue in a nightmare scene that goes awry and you scream and cry for someone to hold and touch you and make life safe
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You know me so well.
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well expressed.
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Thank you.
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Nice. I usually get annoyed by crazy colours, but you seem to pull it off;-)
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Thank you. I actually had a hard time finding a color for the words that would show up on this background is why it's this color.
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Very true and to the point. Thanks =]
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Oh, sissy. That was so incredibly beautiful.
Thanks so much.
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Thank you sis.
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Showcasing your poetry, well I guess that's one way to get read. Love spins when friends come to play in the fountain of youth. Yes to have friends is to have a life, doing things you otherwise would not do. So in essence, friends, or better still true friends keep us young in heart and body. Well said, short but full of meaning. Thanks for sharing it with me.
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lol. Thank you dear.
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a good poem penned with a fine pen, ah yes, a good friend can bring life to our lips, to lift them into smiles of love, to quench the sighs of sorrow's thirst, it's all about love in life, love spins us all around.
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There's no love that compares to the love of true best ftiends.
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I think you are right and this is a lovely and heart felt poem!
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Thank you. I truely feel that way about my best friend.
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