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Indian Summer (haiku)



fluttering white moth...
    faint coolness of fall's approach
        in lazy breezes


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  • Not-The-Sun
    September 6

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    niiice love the title; "lazy" was a unique way to describe "breezes" so thank you for sharing your thoughts! most people would pick on a beautiful monarch or colorful butterfly for their poems but here you chose an innocent, alone white moth; that says a lot, right there! great work!