Clapping along to the music,
The happiness being brought out of me,
Seeing a real reason to live,
Nothing to do with boys,
Just family and friends,
Love all around my floating body.
My smile brighter then ever,
Seeing my path,
My life force that just keeps getting stronger.
For a long time I felt like I was being,
Pulled down by others,
But now I see I pulled myself down,
And now here I am standing up,
Instead of falling.
Forgetting my fears and those tears I once cried,
Just knowing that the best happens to everyone,
And now I am able to feel it too.....
Author notes
So happy and so hyper, not lying anymore. I always pretend to be happy and always cried. But now I feel great and that I can really touch my dreams now! I love life and I love my friends. I love my family. And most important, I love me. Like my camp leader said, AM is for against me and I have been on that station for so long that I forgot how it felt to be happy. Now I learned to switched to FM which is for me. And that I should have more faith in my self. That I should boost myself up, not down. And that's what this poem is about. I hope you enjoy it. I love it and I'd like to hear what you think about it too!!!
So, what do you think of my new stuff?
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very true im happiest surrounded by friends a family to nothin else really matters.
i enjoyed reading this.
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This was so positive
Right now I needed that injection of something positive. A lot of what you said here I relate too. I've been making some personal adjustments and I'm trying the "standing up/Instead of falling approach". I should try to listen to the FM frequency more often. Beautiful ending with that profound sense of optimism. Thanks for this!
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I enjoyed your poem very much and felt it was well written, I agree the most important person to love is your self, that is most important when it comes to true happiness
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