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Confession.

 

 

 

Knife slipped,



her throat caught it.

 

 

 



 

Author notes

Flash Fiction2.

This is not and admission of guilt

A contest entry

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  • crivanea silver member
    September 20
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    woahhh....


  • wandyway
    September 9

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    Okay, wow. I actually feel a little stunned.

    Incredible

    Most powerful thing I've read in a while, and it's only in 6 words. Says something about the poet, don't ya think? Beautiful write.


  • Not-The-Sun silver member
    September 7

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    haha wow >.<

    it definitely left the reader wondering afterwards; 6 word flash fiction can only convey so much, and you conveyed the story line, but the reader is left to question why.
    i like the words you chose and that you put it into 2 separate lines
    great work!


  • Barry Hodges
    September 5

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    I thought this was quite a good little phrase. Not exactly a "poem" but still a good playing with words. PS typo in author's notes!


  • In Too Deep1
    September 5

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    Lol.. now that I have your written admission to guilt.. I am going to have to book you! A wonderful thriller upon a 6 lettered page. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp

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