Protection

I saw a crystal in front of me,
its beauty radiated all around.
The dark corners in the room,
only reflected the crystal's light.

Looking inside the crystal,
I saw images of you
and I turned.

(You put your arms around me)
we danced
the crystals light shone around us
and the darkness never returned

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Prewrite Mania by whispernthedark. 2975 points, ended September 11, 53 entries
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smitaanand
September 26

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It presents an exquisite picture of love and overflowing romance.The emotions seem to be genuine.The glow of the crystal will remain in my heart as a radiant thought.I especially loved the last two lines ,they were simple yet beautiful.Thanks for sharing such a gem...
Erik Ambrose
September 15
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Very nice. It's hard to not be inspired by Floyd.
whispernthedark
September 11
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As I have already commented on this piece I will say thank you for entering the contest, good luck!

♥
whisper
Poetic Tasha
September 6

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wonderful take hun
Maatkara
September 5

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Wonderful! Goes well with that great Pink Floyd song too
Cerulean Sunrise
September 5

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That's a beautiful thing to see.
whispernthedark
September 5

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Syd Barrett was amazing, that's a beautiful tribute to him and your poem is amazing. What a wonderful poem!

♥
whisper