Just another overused word
another game in life
played by all
ruled by so called "playa's", and heartbreakers
and abused by the cheaters
where you hear three magic words
yes magic indeed
just another illusion
love, an emotion
to be afflicted with hormones
love is great, wonderful, almost perfect...
which brings out flaws
teen hearts fooled into false reality
later realizing the crushing mistake
fearing what's next after that
just another source of pain
desired by the lonely
just to be in the norm
to show off accomplishments,
or just to have at least one thing
just another undiscovered drug
taken by all
and ending with catastrophic results
A contest entry
- Love that makes me cry/Yiruma (prewrites and freshwrites) by evershine-90.
760 points, ended October 21, 83 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any critics? How could i make this better, does it make sense?
Comments
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Wow, different read and well written for that matter. Great work, Thank you for sharing this piece
Enjoyed reading it.
Evershine
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