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He sees what I don't



As I stare at him and the love of his life
his smile stretched across his face
as he belies a skinny sparrow
that has no energetic grace

Her sunless eyes keep shining
behind their darkened clouds that blind
I watch as he kisses her thin red lips
as music fills my mind

As berry brandy wisps of song
catch feathers with notes so faint.
Whispering the sonnets
in between the churches gnarled restraint

Her owl like eyes emit wise thoughts
where no such passion lies
I try to pay attention
to the boring preacher’s cries

But although the notes could pierce hearts
I cannot draw away
the images of their loving dance
upon this gloomy day.

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  • Angelflower
    September 20
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    wow, it's another semi-dark write from him, either that or I'm just reading this piece wrong.. which is probably true lol..


  • MJ Forgives
    September 18
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    Wow. Great poem. I loved how you wrote the poem. I really do. I really love this poem! I really do! Love and Peace!
    -Jess