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Devil

Sly and sleek, I cross the deep blue sky,
I glance below and watch them die.
Funny. How they don’t seem to be smiling now,
I can almost hear their pleadings out and loud.
They don’t have a clue how they’re going to pay,
One thing for sure, this torture will not fade away.
Their promises were just desperate lies,
Now lets see who’s the first to die…

Can they see me, I’m sure they don’t.
But my shadows now cross where the sun shone.
Still I believe their fear will kill,
Don’t ever cross the big bad devil.
See me and run, don’t look back again,
Save your self from needless pain.
But if you wish, join my herd,
But keep it soft and don’t say a word.

All is lonely, and hope is lost.
The world is covered in lies and frost.
The cold air that you breathe in here,
Is the product of slaughtered fear?

Don’t be afraid, you’ll be safe with me,
There’s no other sin free place you’ll ever be,
And in turn, I request your life and I’ll be your home
But when the deed is done, it’s your time to go…

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  • My Chronos gold member
    November 24
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    Spookyyyyyy Takes the breath away.

  • Bob Fox
    October 24
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    I love.. sluaghter fear...And who knows you just may be right on with this fine dak write . Write on young poet.


  • Dezzy26
    September 16

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    "All is lonely, and hope is lost.
    The world is covered in lies and frost.
    The cold air that you breathe in here,
    Is the product of slaughtered fear?"

    Loved this part.... good penning, good luck. Very good and descriptive write.

    Dezzi