Moonshine beaming
Fortune dreaming
Old times streaming
Gathers my glance
Sunlit highway
Rural byway
Free-life flyway
Win, Show, or Chance!
© 2009 Joy A. Burki-Watson
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waydownuponjoy
A contest entry
- Somewhere In Between The Lines. by nous..
800 points, ended September 15, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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Beautiful little piece of minimalism!
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so many ways to see the world around us, we sense, we imagine, wish, hope even pray and in all these ways we see ourselves and things around us through the filter of our thoughts... wonderful end rhyme...kinda bounces along...
...Pk 
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I know i read this a couple of days ago, Why did i not comment? sometimes it is the use of the minimum of words that manage to say far more. This is such an example
Wonderful
Good luck in the contest
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Another road trip
on the free-for-all path
called life, with joy
throwing the dice,
always up for another
chance---or so it seems,
joy. A spirited write!
M-C
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Looking out on life and taking the gamble eh Joy. We never know if we have won or lost if we don't gamble do we...(or have I got this all wrong...) Excellent..
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Hmm...sounds like me thinking about playing the lotto tonight...lol
unfortunately the right numbers are always 'somewhere between the lines' of the wrong ones I always play!
Haha, silly ol me
J
hn
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I won't pretend to really get this one, but as you know, I always take a stab at it.
I assume it deals with memories of life in a region. maybe how things were, if not in reality than in how they saw themselves...and see ourselves...or as we say here, "Maine, the way life ought to be."
Or;
It's like a little trip down the highway, seeing the old and new of where you live mixing in together.
Ok, how far off was I? lol
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