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Sickness

darkness decends upon my soul
with the poisonous words
that spill from behind
tainted lips

sickness spreads through
thickened blood
and eats at my vanity
with lustful greed

this disease
creates such doubt
and makes one feel cheap
and utterly worthless

this darkness consumes
without remorse
all that has been
so sincere to heart

takes ones conscience
and leads it to shame
when little is there to endure
such loathsome gestures

what is one to do
when made to feel so hopeless
while innocence plays
an ongoing role?

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i need a different title. any suggestions?

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  • nous. gold member
    September 7

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    possibly poisonous lips?
    quite the write here.. great description on the effect it has on you...


    • Temptation.
      September 7
      Edit | Reply
      thank you.
      maybe i should have explained what it was about for title suggestions.
      my friends dad came home drunk the other night when i was staying the night and told me he wanted to have sex with me.
      i cant go a day without some guy hitting on me. im married. im tired of men. lol