Will you ride with me?
We will drift above,
Suspended from life,
By this golden conoopy.
We will drift higher,
Up, up and away,
Hold my hand tight,
Don't let this moment slip.
A backdrop of paint,
Sunset in the distance,
Silhouetting our figures,
To the world beneath.
Whisper the words of magic,
So truthfully to me,
Ring out all the love,
And cradle me.
Just let go, truth and all
Let your hopes free,
And your dreams soar,
Through this eternity.
Let the wind drift pass,
Through your whispy hair,
Flow through us,
In our basket of love.
Will you ride with me?
Into total oblivion,
Suspended from life,
By our golden canopy.
Author notes
Tell me what I have painted a picture of...
thanks for reading.
l o n e l y a n g e l
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B-E-A-UTIFUL... Lolz. You've been invited to the next round!!
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i gave the best coment. look it is so good im comenting again. whoah! this is one crazy world!
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James Aguilar
Wow
I am impressed. Nice flow of words. I can see what you are saying. I can feel what is in your heart. Using few words. I loved it. Keep it up. 10X10
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for me "suspended from life" give is an almost supernatural feel, life for the space of this ride, life as we know it is on hold.
nicely done.
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Wow..your immagery while praising your beloved makes this poetry an amazing expereince..well done and many thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...
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vivid imagery
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Hot air balloon.
Your an aritsts, a purely terrific painter of words, you are worthy of praise from me! -bows-
joking. But truely, this is a totaly terric piece and I love it so much it is in my finalist list. Well done to that.
I hope i can read more of your work,
Best of luck
gorecki
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