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The changes in this butterfly


Uncovered; my heart lies waiting
What shall be the next step in this life?
Sown the river of my dreams and sorrows
Can i stand up in the crashing waves?
Or may i breathe beneath the strength of my emotions
Magnified by the love i feel
For those who i hold in my heart

Through the frozen tears
I have grown from what i used to be
How have i changed?  And yet
How have i stayed the same?
Weaved within my own web

Who am i now, does anyone know
Is the path im walking the right one?
Or am i lost as a shell on a sea bed
Unknown to my real destination


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  • Nature Song silver member
    September 6

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    Unknown...an empty shell you are not! For your poem speaks volumes of the butterfly yet to be awakened! Springing forward through life and all her mysteries. Great penning!

    ~Sie


  • Stickboy gold member
    September 5

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    Love this Emm , you have grown into a beautiful butterfly and you have spread your wings... When I first met you , you would have never thought you could do all that you've acomplished ... you can do anything you put your mind too.


  • ListeningToSilence
    September 5

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    Wow this is lovely. gosh LOVE IT!!! reminds me of what i'm going through at the moment..xx beautiful poem. honest and real. xx great job