once there was a boy
who was a spy
but he was a toy
you can also buy
if you find it dry
but don't take it to fry
it will cry
and say you bye bye
A contest entry
- Fun, Fun, Funny. by Rosefrn.
550 points, ended September 19, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Cute
This was cute. It made me smile. The last three lines were my favorites.
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Very good
Well written words a little twisted and I don't exactly know what you are saying, but well done with the wit and good flow of words.
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Much better!
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I just loved it. You should be the winner. Good Luck!
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thanks
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I like this.
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Quite good except the bye is meant to be buy. Well done.
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ohh thanks.I will change it right now
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