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The Bridge

Along a faded path I walk
Rain drops flooding my footsteps
Trees droop in despair
Their leaves falling slowly to the ground
To lay at my feet
Never to see the sun again.

Slowly I walk
Unaware of my surroundings
Senses shut down
A broken heart
A wounded soul
Eyes swollen with tears.

Eyes cast down
Alone and forgotten
Each step leading closer to pain
Walking on broken shards
Heart pouring out to no one
A bridge in site.

Life forfeit
Upon the small bridge
My reflection stares back
The water calm and welcoming
Fingers loosen
Water rushing toward me

Darkness.

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