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Bella's Questions?

Who is this boy;
or should I say man,
that is so coy,
and always withstands.

He seems to be angry
and very withdrawn.
He seems unhappy
and very much gone.

His name so bold;
Edward Cullen,
He seems so old,
mature I mean.

What is it about him
that draws me in?
I wonder of him and them;
them, his family as in.

Their beauty and grace
it just seems odd
and out of place,
as of a god.

What are you Cullen?
What is it about you
that draws me in,
that attracts me too.

Other than your wordly beauty
your exquisite grace,
your eyes golden and pretty
something out of trace.

Who are you...
or what are you,
Edward Cullen?

Author notes

I'm not gonna lie I need an Edward too...

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Comments


  • Dave-Joseph
    September 5, 2009
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    Oh em gee. This one is so simple, yet so effective. Impressive


    • Word Artisan
      September 5, 2009
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      thanks

      I am a big fan of twilight too and these questions I'm asking them myself...so I thought I could mix my emotions with hers and well it worked I guess... thanks again...Adam