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Love, what is it?

Love...
for what is love, to be exact?
Is it the bright, shining eyes every morning,
or is it, in fact, the fights to endure,
only to be held by your One?

Love...
what is this feeling?
Is it the butterflies,
or the anger to triumph?

What is it?

Can anyone hear me?
My voice echoes,
screams to be heard!
People speak of this feeling,
but what is it?

Is it his warm skin to be held on to every night?
Or is it the blood dripping from your eyes?

What is it?

Is it passionate sex,
and then long talks afterwords?
Or is it the lonliness,
waiting for your Knight in shining armor?

What is it?

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Just a thought-teaser...or maybe not so much..whatever

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  • OurxBeginning
    September 5

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    I really enjoyed this, dearest. Love is so many things. Fights, tears and happiness. Wonderful write, and keep it up.


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    September 5

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    Very nice job on this. Yes, love is very mysterious I love my girlfriend very much, and thankfully she feels the same way Anyway, I really liked this piece.




    -Steve-